英语作文中考真题训练第9期
2024年江西中考英语作文
六、书面表达(15分)
- 我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间,增强时间管理意识,学校英语社团以“Making Better Use of Time”为题向学生征文,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1.When do you have free time?
2.What do you often do in your free time?(Give 3 examples)
3.Do you think your free time is better used? Why or why not?
要求:
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Making Better Use of Time
As a junior high school student, I have got more free time in recent years. I am always free on weekends.
When I am free, I have many activities. I usually play the piano and football. I like playing football very much. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play football on weekends. I have piano lessons twice a week. I also have plenty of time to exercise in the evening. Sometimes, my parents and I look at the stars outside.
I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的课余时间活动,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己什么时候有空闲时间;
第二步,介绍自己空闲时间的活动;
第三步,介绍自己是否利用好自己的空闲时间以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends在周末
②plenty of大量的
③look at看
[高分句型]
①When I am free, I have many activities. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment. (because引导的原因状语从句,what引导的宾语从句)
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