英语作文中考真题训练第10期
2024年山西中考英语作文
九、书面表达（共15分）请将发言稿写在答题卡相应的位置上。
- 随着全球互联互通，青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行，你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
- your idea about what young people should be like
- one of your stories about fighting
- the meaning of fighting
要求：
1．词数不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文：
As young people, we should be brave, confident and creative, but the most important thing is to be willing to fight.
Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises. Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try. I spent all my free time on English reading. Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them. Gradually, I made great progress in reading comprehension.
It’s fighting that makes us better and better. Fighting is the brightest color of youth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，多种时态综合运用；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述个人观点，认为青少年应该是什么样子的，具备什么样的品质；
第二步，具体介绍个人的经历，阐述自己是如何奋斗的；
第三步，表达个人感悟，阐述奋斗的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
②make mistakes犯错误
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
④spend some time on sth.花费时间做某事
⑤make great progress in sth.在某方面取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try.（the+比较级, the+比较级）
③Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them.（whenever引导让步状语从句）
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