英语作文中考真题训练第11期
2024年陕西中考英语作文
Ⅸ. 书面表达（共1题，计15分）
- 假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。
参考词汇：
grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), a feeling of satisfaction, fun, learn, …
要求：
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hi Tom,
How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
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Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【答案】例文
Hi Tom,
How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you.
This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put the seed to a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.
The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I hope you try this too! Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Li Bin
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：主要记录栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，说明栽种的种子和种子的变化；
第二步，分享感受。
[亮点词汇]
①looked after照顾
②interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.（时间状语从句）
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