英语作文中考真题训练第12期
2024年天津中考英语作文
九、书面表达（本大题共 15 分）
- 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。
（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。
（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。
（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：盲人 blind man
徘徊 wander
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.
Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home. Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man. When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others.
What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on her way home 在她回家的路上
②offer to do sth 主动提出做某事
③communicate with 沟通
④learn from 向某人学习
[高分句型]
①When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略that的宾语从句）
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