2024年重庆中考英语作文A卷

英语作文中考真题训练目录汇总

英语作文中考真题训练第14期

2024年重庆中考英语作文A卷

IX.书面表达。（满分20分）

82. 雨天总让人烦恼，下雨了，愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校，哪知随后却有惊喜发生……

发生了什么呢？请根据上述文字，并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。

要求：

1.80—120词；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

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【答案】例文：

One rainy day, Mary was in a rush to school, feeling sad and upset. But on the way, she noticed raindrops hitting the ground, ants scurrying around, and plants looking fresh. Several students, wearing raincoats and carrying umbrellas, were playing in puddles in the rain. They jumped like frogs and had a lot of fun. Mary joined them and felt little better.

When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show. She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side. Just like in a story or a painting, there are always different aspects. She learned not to let small things bother her and to enjoy every moment.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：根据表格中的参考内容结合图片，完成故事的写作，注意语法正确，逻辑清晰。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出故事发生的时间、地点、人物，并介绍上学路上发生的事情，以及主人公的心情；

第二步，介绍到了学校后发生的事情，以及主人公的感悟。

[亮点词汇]

①in a rush匆忙地

②had a lot of fun玩得很开心

③talent show才艺表演

[高分句型]

①When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show.（when引导的时间状语从句）

②She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. （定语从句）

③She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side.（宾语从句）

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